New To Mixing with my AT4040 mic for Rap

[Altermax]

Hello, I don't have a great ear for mixes, but how does this sound, and where should I direct my attention?

dropbox.com/s/w1xd1tip2sjuamw/demo.mp3

I just did some multiband compression on FL, and reverb. Some segments are layers with another take, and I have that track coming out of both speakers. My area is decently treated with bedfoam and curtains on the way.

 

[TheChikenMaster]

pay me the right price ill make it sound like a platinum record...

 

[soloboy]

didn't you EQ yet? if you didn't, try to boost high range a bit powerfully & try cutting low a bit. it wouldn't sound as flat as now

and i guess you can shoot a bit more of thresh on your comp. deck.

btw when you equalize your doublings, you should give different freq. and boost from main vocal's EQ. I usually prefer setting high form of freq. just opposite way from main to doubling voc.

hope it helped!!