New song in a new direction - Maiden - Please tell me what you think

[rilez]

I released an EP in January with 6 songs(in my sig), I am still deciding my musical direction and I would love for ya'll to tell me what you think(especially if they are technical critiques like mastering).
Thank you guys very much!
Maiden by rileztx on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

 

[jeffmaher]

Nice!

The boom gets buried in the choruses. Need dat boom.

Reminds me of a recent hit...can't remember the name something about 'stars'...great tune. You modelled it after that one? Nailed the genre.

No..wait: it was about 'fireflies'.

 

[dewhitt]

Hey Riley,

This is very cool, man. Your vocals are radio ready for sure...you've got a really current sound. There is one part near the end of the song where the low octave vocals come in and I found them to be way too loud in the mix, but everything else sat pretty well for me.

Best,

Dave
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[ido1957]

Good tune - like Dave said very modern sounding. Mix is good for me. Good luck with your music career!