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hey.
wow, the song sounds pretty 14 year old-ish. not that it's bad, just made me smile, because i think i probably sounded like you when i first started. probably worst actually
i think you've done well for a beginner.
but here are my tips
vocals were pretty horrible. i hope you don't sing it to this girl. but you'll get better if you play more and your voice develops. try to pronounce the words a little bit better. you sound like the guy from blink182.
guitars were too loud i think, but i did like the tone.
i detected some timing problems, try to use a metronome, at least to practice with.
good luck, keep up the good work.
wow, the song sounds pretty 14 year old-ish. not that it's bad, just made me smile, because i think i probably sounded like you when i first started. probably worst actually

i think you've done well for a beginner.
but here are my tips
vocals were pretty horrible. i hope you don't sing it to this girl. but you'll get better if you play more and your voice develops. try to pronounce the words a little bit better. you sound like the guy from blink182.
guitars were too loud i think, but i did like the tone.
i detected some timing problems, try to use a metronome, at least to practice with.
good luck, keep up the good work.