NEW SONG "EVERYTHINGS A LIE" CHECK IT OUT AND LEAVE COMMENTS THANKS

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hey.

wow, the song sounds pretty 14 year old-ish. not that it's bad, just made me smile, because i think i probably sounded like you when i first started. probably worst actually :)

i think you've done well for a beginner.

but here are my tips

vocals were pretty horrible. i hope you don't sing it to this girl. but you'll get better if you play more and your voice develops. try to pronounce the words a little bit better. you sound like the guy from blink182.

guitars were too loud i think, but i did like the tone.

i detected some timing problems, try to use a metronome, at least to practice with.

good luck, keep up the good work.
 
14 years old you say???Well you got a great future ahead of you......very nice! :cool:
 
lol

lol yeah man i do need work on my singing lol no i dont sing it to a girl i jsut started singing cause i play drums also and i jsut picked up the guitar lol
thanks for listening
 
it's not about slick. It's about expression and communication. You expressed and communicated well. Slick sucks, your tune doesn't. Save this version for good. Someday when you've gotten better at sounding slick, you'll play it and ask yourself why you thought you had to work so hard on sounding slick. It happens. You'll sound technically better after a while because 'you' want to, not because you weren't able to communicate and express. Wecome to the craft.
 
14 years old too

yeah im 14 too. if i were you what i would do is go buy one of those pieces that makes a 1/4 into 1/8 so you can at least get a direct sound no through a computer mic with guitar. ive used that and an 80 dollar pa head to do these with the band im in so its pretty much nothing. is that your first song? good work

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good luck,
derek
 
cool

how did u record your drums ..... i liked your songs really cool i also play drums and bass but cant really record them to sound well ur songs sound good
 
14yearoldkid said:
how did u record your drums ..... i liked your songs really cool i also play drums and bass but cant really record them to sound well ur songs sound good
these were old recordings
i was very limitted
i had 3 mics (Shure Crappy PG48's)
one mixer
into my computer

the drums wer all in one track...so that sucked too..but somehow i got away wit it pretty good.

i put one on bass, snare and behind the drumset.

the guitars were miked from their cabinets.

mess around wit the EQ alot....compress if u have to...
add a little reverb here and there
 
o ok

o alright man ill try to see if that works thanks later
 
Hey, 14,

That's MUCH better than that first one you posted! Keep working on it.
 
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