New song..again and again

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Sounds pretty good. The vocals get drowned out a little when the accompaniment guitars come in during the verses. Also, does it have a bass line? I'm not hearing one, but maybe you're not using one. Anyway, sounds pretty nice. :)
 
No bassline and yeah the vocals are a little drowned out at those times. Thanks for the comment:)
 
Acoustics sound great...nice playing, I like the 2nd acoustic that sounds like it is panned heavy to the left...very easy to listen to, I like it!
 
Greg_L said:
The vocals get drowned out a little when the accompaniment guitars come in during the verses.
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Yes that's the only thing I noticed too. I'd maybe take the level down a tad on that guitar on the right. Your vocals - both lead and harmony - sound great. No problem there. Some bass - either bass guitar or eq'ing the guitars would be cool.... Overall good writing and playing too....

:) :D :) :D
 
I'm guessing you've lifted the vocals? They cut through well now, if anything just a smidgen, fractions of a db, too hot in spots. Good vocals though, nice tune too
 
Thanks variaxman, glad you think the acoustics sound good! ido1957, you're right about the drowning out, thanks for listening...nah Bulls Hit, I haven't upped them or anything...well I have, but I haven't reposted on soundclick...I don't think I'll worry about it.

Appreciate the comments. Next I'm gonna try to do something 12bar blues ish...on acoustic
 
The vocal works - not Pavarotti but they tell the story & the harmonies fatten it up too.
Get a bass in there.
the loops are OK - good job.
Nice song mate.
Just a little sense of N Young in the stretch to the notes in the chorus but that's cool too.
GOOD WORK.
 
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