New Original Tune: Good Morning (Hardcore Punk like Gorilla Biscuits, NOFX)

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I wrote this one about how everyone is hooked on their phones and caffeine, and people reach for both from the moment they wake up in the morning. The two feed off of each other all day long and it’s a really unhealthy cycle.

The music is of course kind of chaotic. Challenging to make the lyrics intelligible because of the dense mix and speed of the song, but probably acceptable for this genre. I’d love to get you thoughts on the mix, especially from those familiar with this style of music! Thanks for the input and feedback as always!

Lyrics:

Good Morning

“Morning, I missed you”
But then I could see she wasn’t talking to me
Dependency
We give up self control, it pulls like gravity

Get ready it’s almost here
As you walk right past me
To sip your drug of choice
Double dip dopamine
So much wasted time
To consume the feed
Fast way to rot the mind
Force feed you how to think

It’s Lost on me
All the appeal I’d rather hold and touch and feel
I think it’s time think don’t you?
And look around to see the other things that we can do

Get ready it’s almost here
As you walk right past me
To sip your drug of choice
Double dip dopamine
So much wasted time
To consume the feed
Fast way to rot the mind
Force feed you how to think

Can’t call it a mistake because it happens every day
And when I tell the truth I have to watch the things I say
It’s me who’s critical, just shut my mouth and toss the key
But there’s two ways to feel I guess the burden’s all on me

Mix 1
 
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