New mix of a rather old song (of mine)

[bendbones]

Hey everyone, I haven't posted for a while. Anyhow, just got a new computer and it has spurred me on to try and remix some of my stuff, please let me know what you reckon of the following, it was mostly recorded last november; please be as critical as possible:

Cheers,
Ben.

 

[bendbones]

No one at all? Erm..., please? (Cheers)

 

[DonF]

Sorry, I did listen yesterday, but didn't want to rush a critique.

I think you overdid the high-end EQ. It sounds very harsh to me. That makes it a bit difficult to listen to. I compared it to a previous mix of the same song that you posted last year, and I liked the old one better.

This is not to say that it's bad by any means; I just think it needs a lighter touch in the EQ department.

Don