I really like the song. Great vocal and guitar performance. As far as the mix...
Great vocal sound. The guitar sounds good but not quite as good as the vocal. It's a little boxy sounding. I'm nit picking here though it's not bad at all but not really stellar either.
Good job K-DUB.
K,
Sounds like the middle is missing from the guitar.
The hesitancy in the guitar matches the vulnerability in the vocal/lyric.
The BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE went a little long.
I like the lyric except the part in the hook"...I don't play games
So don't play those games with me."
Games x 2 - they're a little too near to work in my head. My brain keeps searching for a replacement word.
That's just me & you can ignore it but I know everytime I hear this track I'll do that same thing again.
Good tune, good performance. My only comment would be, vocals down a bit, guitar up and a little more high end would brighten it up. The "Beeee", while it was long, it did show you can hold a note.
Nice song.
Thanks Dave! Good thoughts. It's exactly that balance in the simple stuff that makes it difficult.
I liked the vocal a bunch. Really clear and upfront. Nice tone as well.
The guitar was OK, but not stellar. Too much reverb - and it might also be contributing to the boxiness. I hear some hiss in the intro. The upper midrange is a little harsh. I'm also hearing a little swirliness. Might be an MP3 conversion, but I'm not sure.
the beeeeee is way WAY to long in my opinion, everything else o.k. I would prefer to hear a higher quality version, when I press mono + reverse phase to hear the sides only on my audient I am hearing a lot of artifacts
Sometimes the simple stuff is the hardest to get right. Any/all comments warmly appreciated.
Kev-
Love it K-dub, and I say it every time I listen to your stuff, it sounds like it want's to be part of a stage production. Seriously mate... write a musical!![]()
Oh, yeah, the simple stuff!
Vocals and guitar sound excellent. Nice little song. I liked the math lesson at the beginning.I agree that the vocal could be slightly quieter. No other comments on the mix.
Assuming it was the same link in the first post. Clean, but sound like your 4/5 string is rumbling on you a bit. If you could isolate that and tame it, I think you have a nice mix here.
Listen to your friend K-dub, he's not wrong, almost all of your songs sound like they are a part of a story.