NEED HOOK HELP bad

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RAM BEATZ

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Yo i am working on this track and i want to put a hook in it. but ery body know i aint got the vocal skills. I posted me spitting to it the chorus that i want but i need some body that can feel the west coast for it . peep it if nothing else http://www.soundclick.com/rambeatz its called back up. as i said my vocals aint hittin so help a brother out :D
 
word son!

you sound like a 92 ol west coast emcee.... i wish i was an la emcee but i would sure love to put a verse to it.
 
Killah_Trakz said:
you sound like a 92 ol west coast emcee.... i wish i was an la emcee but i would sure love to put a verse to it.
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obviously which is why i need somebody to hook it hell I aint a mc at all. I know you say you aint west coast but maybe you can still hook it holla at ya boy
 
I like the beat and the whole feel of it. I know you wasnt looking for any feedback, but I am an old school head and I am feeling it!
 
Speaking as someone who grew up on West Coast Hip-Hop.... This needs work. The hook is ok. In my opinion, it's not catchy enough, and it's too wordy.

Just my opinion though, so take it with a grain of salt.
 
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