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blkdog7
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Not sure what do with this mix. It's driving me mad.
Do we need to re-record the vox?
Anything good, bad, not right?
Do we need to re-record the vox?
Anything good, bad, not right?
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fuzzrhythm
New member
The vocals seem to lack presence and want a lot of space that other sounds are taking. Maybe move some of the other elements out of the way with EQ cuts/panning?
VomitHatSteve
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Sounds pretty cool.
I might cut down on the reverb and "spaciness" a little, especially later in the song. Maybe use a more straightforward rock-type tone during the middle high points of the song?
After listening some more, some snare would really help. You've got that electronic brush-snare thing, which sounds cool but doesn't really drive the song.
I might cut down on the reverb and "spaciness" a little, especially later in the song. Maybe use a more straightforward rock-type tone during the middle high points of the song?
After listening some more, some snare would really help. You've got that electronic brush-snare thing, which sounds cool but doesn't really drive the song.
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blkdog7
What Pro Tools *****?
Ok, we worked a lot more on this song. New vocals, less reverb. More guitars. Etc.
Do you think the vocals are too dry now?
What do you think???:
Do you think the vocals are too dry now?
What do you think???:
bozmillar
New member
My vote would be somewhere in between the two. The second one sounded a bit too dry, but that may just be because I listened to it right after the first one.
VomitHatSteve
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I like the new version a lot. The vox sound really good now, especially during the bridge.
I still think some non-electronic drums would help drive the song, but it works as is.
I still think some non-electronic drums would help drive the song, but it works as is.
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blkdog7
What Pro Tools *****?
Many thanks for the input. It has definitely influenced the mix.
Here is what I think is the final mix:
What do you think?
Here is what I think is the final mix:
What do you think?
rayc
retroreprobate
the guitar takes over from the synth too quickly in the intro: a better fade out/in would sound better to me.
The snare sound could be a bit more aggressive.
With all the sonic noodling going on all you need is a driving turbo guitar to be in minor Hawkwind territory.
All of that being said - the song is really good.
The snare sound could be a bit more aggressive.
With all the sonic noodling going on all you need is a driving turbo guitar to be in minor Hawkwind territory.
All of that being said - the song is really good.
joro
The Pie Guy
good vocals but, a little low in the mix....sort of dry too....
I like the lo-fi vox a lot...nice eq there....also a little low level wise in the mix to me...
guitars sound good to me but a bit loud at the ending....
synth parts are pretty good....
is the bass line synth as well?
pretty cool man...
I like the lo-fi vox a lot...nice eq there....also a little low level wise in the mix to me...
guitars sound good to me but a bit loud at the ending....
synth parts are pretty good....
is the bass line synth as well?
pretty cool man...
KyleAtGalaxy
Dedicated newb
The lo fi delay vocal is really nice. Overall I think it sounds pretty sweet. Nice job.
VomitHatSteve
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Did you take the old mixes down? It would be nice to have them for comparison.
It sounds like you added a driving kick drum part? That sounds good. Vocal tone still sounds good too.
It sounds like you added a driving kick drum part? That sounds good. Vocal tone still sounds good too.
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blkdog7
What Pro Tools *****?
Yes, I did take the old mixes down. D'oh! I'll try putting them back up. Thanks for wanting to listen.
Here is an even newer mix. For now, we are done!:
Chili
Site Moderator
Haven't heard any of the previous versions, but I think one is very good. Right out of the box, it's a memorable song. No crits.
Good job,
Cheers,
Good job,
Cheers,