Need comments for a recording

[Danmeister]

Hi!
This is my first post, so hello to all!

I'd like to hear comments about this recording that is not finished yet. I'm not very experienced with recording stuff so all the tips are appreciated. Just looking for comments / ideas. I'm thinking on recording the vocals soon. Thanks!

http://www.danmeister.net/mediafiles/music/download.php?file=short.mp3

 

[Sarumann]

Sarumann

Hi mate!
I have been a musican for more than 15 years
and i still think it is difficult to create original music
but i downloaded your mp3 and listen to it...
it sounded okay should be vocal there too..
you got potential just give it a go and continue
dont let anyone put you down..
the next one will be better and the other better than that

Cheers
Bro

 

[xfinsterx]

the grain table sweeps in the intro were neat, but the rest of the cut didnt go anywhere.

it sounds like the drums were a roland v kit.