"Mystery Movement #2"

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Uhm.. I made a new mp3. I was hoping I could ask for some opinions. Is production ok? I have pretty severe hearing loss so I miss a lot of stuff in mix, unbalanced mix, etc.. Any tips welcome.


The file is "Mystery Movement #2"

http://www.vanblarcom.com/Khompewtur/mp3
 
Hey whoever rated this one star and didn't even bother to post a reply, I think that's pretty cheesy.

I think you should at least give a reason and rating my material sow low may impact others perceptions of it and then I won't be able to get people to take a listen and that's the whole reason I put it up here.


I don't mind if you don't like it, but what I'm interested in is why
 
is this in english?

the guitar gets lost behind all the voices..
This is pretty insane.. Sounds like a hidden track on a cd or something.
The tune gets pretty boring.. I kept waiting for the guitars to bust in. your guitar riff sounds more like a bass line.
The recording pretty good but I dont like the song.
 
The one star and run thing sucks, but it got my attention so I checked out your tune.
Sounds pretty good. I like the vocals a lot - great control.

What I didn't like was there was too much weird stuff. I think you could get rid of three quarters of the weird stuff and still have it sound pretty whacked.

The mix sounds pretty good - sorry to hear about the hearing loss. It's hard to give comments because it's pretty unconventional stuff. All in all a good mix that could be a bit more subtle.
 
I like this

This thing reminds me of something that might actually kill me if I remember it.

Kinda cool, I dig it.
 
I kinda like it too...

It needs some screaming guitar though...


:)
 
I really liked this, It was liking raking a stroll around the market place on planet Gxikoizs. Even the alien conversation was cool. Panning of the eretheral voices was nice. The guitar got a little boomy at times on the low end. Some 22nd century arabic techno-woodwind would add some spice maybe.
 
Toki987 said:
I really liked this, It was liking raking a stroll around the market place on planet Gxikoizs. Even the alien conversation was cool. Panning of the eretheral voices was nice. The guitar got a little boomy at times on the low end. Some 22nd century arabic techno-woodwind would add some spice maybe.
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Thats exactally what I was going to say, word for word...
but I decided to keep it simple... :p
 
This song had nothing to hold my interest. Due to the repeating chord/riff on the guitar I kept on waiting for something to kick in, as a matter of fact the dynamics seemed to get lower as the song progressed. Anway for what it's worth you sound like you have some talent and I'd like to hear something from you with more energy, more dynamics. Don't be afraid to sing clearer or bring your vocals to the front, you sound like you have a good clear voice. Keep on a keepin on..... :)
 
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