My new track!

[Nivrock]

Hey guys!
I'm a 14 year old producer from India and I just finished a new track. So, I'd like your valuable opinion about it!
Please tell me where the song sucks. It'll really help me to improve.
P.S: If you like it, please tell everyone you know about me and my music. It could change my life. Thank you.
SONG LINK - https://soundcloud.com/nivrock/nivrock-not-so-far-original

 

[simimatt]

Hopefully this track was awesome, and i dint find anything less in this song

 

[UndergroundGemz]

keep it going

 

[Rubino Prod.]

Its good, nice work. Only one thing. For me it is very stereotype. Only one main melody ..., in the middle of the song can be some change, other melody.

 

[YOgurtbeats]

nice job!!