My latest mix, critique please!

[inmyheartx]

Band's not the most amazing, but they are friends of mine. Let me know what you think:

http://www.myspace.com/nightrunsred

Sorry it's on myspace, but ya.. Let me know please! Any criticism, good or bad, helps me get better. Thanks in advance, duders!

Take care,
Adam.

 

[inmyheartx]

Bump?

Take care,
Adam.

 

[DavidK]

I like the song. The production seems fine. My nit would be: It needs to be tighter. It doesnt sound like the band is really locked in to each other.

 

[Nick_Black]

it seams verry weak. I'm on headphones, but i can't hear the bass drum. if it's multi tracked, bump up the low frequencies on the bass drum, raise the high frequencies on vox. and guitar... and snare. (but not all the same frequencies) (let your ear decide what range) and yeah, the band needs a bit of work as a whole. more fills for the drums would be nice to and a bit more variation for the guitars. induvidually they sound good.