My first song...

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Mad,
Let me tell ya somethin...when a song gives me goose bumps...it's a keeper! I listened to the one without drums first. I liked it even though you didn't bring the strings where I would have...or the drums in the other tune. I still think it's a great song! Just a couple of things, in the one with drums I think the snare needs a bit more bite, and now that you have all that other stuff goin on...the vox need another (very slight) tweek. Now's when the mix gets challenging. You're doing a damn good job by the way.


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I don't know which one i like more. But what's with the 5 minutes of silence in the mix with drums? didn't you wonder why the mp3 was 10 megs?
 
Awesome job. I just listened to the mix with the drums and strings. I got kicked off (sorry internet connection) a little bit after the strings started, but it sounds awesome. Come up with the vocals a little where the strings come in.
 
Oops!

I saw that five-minute silence, and I trimmed it off, but then uploaded the OLD file that still had the silence. That's what six years of college will do for ya....

Thanks for the critiques, guys. On my last listen I also realized that where the strings kick up an octave in the instrumental section they just jump out and box your ears. Need to pull that back a bit.

I may give the vocals another go also. The little pitch waver on the very first phrase of the song is just a terrible downer to the rest of the song.
 
Nice job -

Great piano, great lyrics, great voice control.

Nice and tasty.

Peace,
jono
 
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