My Demo - Walking On Moonlit Shadows

[innerdream]

Hello all

I would be grateful if you would take a listen to my new song that I have uploaded – Walking On Moonlit Shadows – at my soundclick page at the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2475272&q=Hi

Your comments and views are most welcome on all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc)

Cheers

Lyrics

Today I walk through the streets from this place to the shore
The moonlit sky brings the rain for now and evermore
I’ve seen their faces before from many years ago
I feel their sad, cold embrace – why do they feel this way?

I’ve been waiting for the sunrise
I’ve been waiting all my life

Every dream I had made me feel so sad
As I walk on moonlit shadows

As I sit here deep in thought, how can they bring the change?
They have to walk through the door or life will stay the same
The inner will still remains in everyone I see
Today they can make the change and live life their own way

I’ve been waiting for the sunrise
I’ve been waiting all my life

Every dream I had made me feel so sad
As I walk on moonlit shadows

© PFM 29/05/05

For other InnerDream songs, news, updates etc click on the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/innerdreammusic.htm

 

[innerdream]

does anyone have any thoughts on the song?

 

[Track Rat]

Wrong forum my friend.

 

[Garry Sharp]

MP3 clinic, or the songwriting forum if you specifically want comments on that aspect.

 

[innerdream]

Cheers for the advice - how do I move the thread into the correct forum?