My best work yet? someothertime feedback APPRECIATED

Steakfry

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My best work in my own opinion so far, let me know what you think or what can be improved. Keep in mind it bulids as the song goes on and is a bit verbose.
Much appreciation!
 
The attack on the handclaps and guitar stabs are a little crispy.

The vocal is washed out with reverb. The rest of the tracks are not.

I think there is a nice sounding vocal behind the reverb. It sounds like an intimate song, the reverb doesn't fit.

The kick is very rumbly and really not suited to the mix. It sounds like it's clipping badly.

Some of the synth stuff sounds nice. Some of it is a little pointy.

I'd say get rid of the reverb and choose another kick. EQ out some of the harshness. It might be a decent mix.
 
I think 3M said it well.

I actually like the vocal washed out like that (as an effect, doesn't sound natural), but if you're going to use it as a blatant effect like that, you have to bring it up above the instruments volume-wise.
 
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