mixed and dry sample

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first off,thanks to all those that helped me last time..

www.soundclick.com/blackscope ..top of the page,mixed and dry


now..here's a dry sample. if u guys could tell me what i should do to the mix(highs,lows,mids) to adjust it and what effects wut sound right wit it...
and theirs a mixed sample,wit effects, i mixed in headphones due to no speakers..but let me know how the mix came out..thanks

 

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can some1 help

 

[olfunk]

not really my kinda thing but id like to help.
the mixed version is pretty gud, cant think of anything to improve it except that noise which sounds like someone hitting a hihat as fast as they can. just that noise made me not like it. get rid of that and itll be perfect imo.

 

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yea, thas the beat.
thanks

 

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yeaaaaaaaa

 

[travelin travis]

that hi-hat sound has to go, it's pissin me off, lol.

 

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that hi-hat sound has to go, it's pissin me off, lol.

hahaha.the beat was sent to me by a homie as a collab

 

[travelin travis]

so make him resend it without the hihat. i think it's the only thing killing the tune.