"Marianne"

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Blor007 said:
First off all , really nice tune .

Drum
-Snare could use more highs by cutting lows , maybe a small boost on the highs.
-I like a bit more highs in the kickdrum but that really isnt necessary
-Toms sound too boxy, boost around 150-700 untill you find the nasty frequency and then cut these.

Guitar
-Lead guitar sounds great and blends nicely.
-Electric guitar could use some harmonic enhancement.
-I'd put a de-esser on the acoustic guitar untill you can compress the attack on the acoustic guitar.

Vox
-Vox could be clearer but It really does not disturb me , I think It blends nicely with the music.
-Backings need a little more stereo room imo, you could pan them 20-20 with a delay on them.
The ooeee-oeee backings are per-fect !


These are all things that I would work on but are really not that important as the entire vibe of the mix is already very good.

Maybe you find points which upon you agree , just trying to help ;)

Good feedback Blor007 and thanks for listening.

I will experiment with your suggestion about the tom sound. That was the one complaint about the kit sound from the drummer.

I think I am going to re-track the acoustic. I intentionally used a very thin nylon pick to get a strummy sort of sound and got what I asked for, just too much pick sound. If that doesn't work I will try your suggestion.

Thanks again to you and everyone else who listened and offered advice. It is very helpful. I'm in the process of doing a remix.

Bart
 
I have to agree with RAMI on this one - overall a very cool tune. You've done a lot of processing work on the vocals from the sound of it. The reverb you need is sitting on the lead guitar that comes in after the solo... ;) Maybe not quite as much but the flavor is nice... Very nice.....

:) :D :) :D
 
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