"Marianne"

[Bartman]

First off all , really nice tune .

Drum
-Snare could use more highs by cutting lows , maybe a small boost on the highs.
-I like a bit more highs in the kickdrum but that really isnt necessary
-Toms sound too boxy, boost around 150-700 untill you find the nasty frequency and then cut these.

Guitar
-Lead guitar sounds great and blends nicely.
-Electric guitar could use some harmonic enhancement.
-I'd put a de-esser on the acoustic guitar untill you can compress the attack on the acoustic guitar.

Vox
-Vox could be clearer but It really does not disturb me , I think It blends nicely with the music.
-Backings need a little more stereo room imo, you could pan them 20-20 with a delay on them.
The ooeee-oeee backings are per-fect !


These are all things that I would work on but are really not that important as the entire vibe of the mix is already very good.

Maybe you find points which upon you agree , just trying to help

Good feedback Blor007 and thanks for listening.

I will experiment with your suggestion about the tom sound. That was the one complaint about the kit sound from the drummer.

I think I am going to re-track the acoustic. I intentionally used a very thin nylon pick to get a strummy sort of sound and got what I asked for, just too much pick sound. If that doesn't work I will try your suggestion.

Thanks again to you and everyone else who listened and offered advice. It is very helpful. I'm in the process of doing a remix.

Bart

 

[ido1957]

I have to agree with RAMI on this one - overall a very cool tune. You've done a lot of processing work on the vocals from the sound of it. The reverb you need is sitting on the lead guitar that comes in after the solo... Maybe not quite as much but the flavor is nice... Very nice.....