The guitars and the bass are doing what I would expect them to do for this kind of track. They have appropriate sounds, slick playing and I admire the compositional aspects of the music. I don't like the drums, however. The kick is not right, to my ear - there is a very good low end, that has a musical sound to it, as if it is generated with a 60 Hz sample blended in with it, but there's no defined punch to the upper frequencies. It sounds like half a decent kick sound, to me. I don't like the snare reverb. It's too long, too like a fake drum put through the spring reverb of a guitar amp, rather than a real drum being hit in a room. I want to hear a vocal. I like some instrumental music, but mostly I want a vocal to direct the music, to take the song somewhere.
This is better than most stuff posted in here, Schwarz, and it's your own stuff, so kudos for that.