Just Another One (Original) - 15 year old one man band

[GreendogStudios]

Hey,

So I wrote this song for my band, but we just broke up so I'm posting it here as my own thing.

I sequenced it in Logic Express 8, used software instruments for the keyboards, and used EWQL SD2 for the drums. I hope you guys like it!

P.S Sorry about putting the age thing in the title, I hate it when people do that myself, but it does get more views :-/.

Crit for crit!

Here's the link to the song: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=990364

It's called Just Another One.

Thanks in advance!

 

[Supercreep]

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[RAMI]

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Yup.

 

[GreendogStudios]

Huh that's weird.

Here's the link: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=990364

Sorry about that!

(Fixed in original post too).

 

[joeym]

Sounds pretty well arranged, good panning and instrument levels, except for when the voice comes in. There, the level is hay-wire and the voice sounds pretty muddy to me. And pitchy. Don't know about the snare sound. Nonetheless with some more work and a better singing performance this is a good tune.

Joey