It's Just Been Sunset...

[e unum pluribus]

a new one i wrote cause i couldnt sleep ....

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[Calwood]

Great tune! Nice playing. I didnt like it between 2:30 and the 3 minute mark. I think that part needs work but the rest I liked alot.
I still like your vocs,..even when your not doing sting. ha ha.

Good writing

Take 'er easy,..
Calwood

 

[e unum pluribus]

Great tune! Nice playing. I didnt like it between 2:30 and the 3 minute mark. I think that part needs work but the rest I liked alot.
I still like your vocs,..even when your not doing sting. ha ha.

Good writing

Take 'er easy,..
Calwood

thanks for the feedback

which part in particular about that section between 2:30 and 3:00? was it the guitar, vocals, performance, you know...

i was kinda iffy about the bridge or whatever you want to call it...
should i drop it or just change the vocals?... any way thanks for the help...