WATYF - it's cool.. I understand why you think the drums are off.. I have received enough feedback to know that they groove with the room to breathe.. thanks
participant -

cool..
Alan McGuinness - thanks a lot for that great reply.. Black Sabbath has always been it for me... I got my first Sabbath album when I was in 4th grade.. My little friends were listening to the soundtrack from 'Grease,' and I had the first Sabbath album... I bought it in for show and tell.. I had older brothers who liked it, but by the time I was in 6th grade, they were asking me to copy cassettes for them... As soon as I heard those first words, "What is this, that stands before me," I was hooked, and it never wore off.. Between Bill Ward's great drumming, and Tony's guitar, Geezers awesome bass.. ahhh..

O.k. sorry for the rant.. I think I may be adding vocals to this eventually.. hopefully I'll get my own website going and I'll have high quality versions that can actually be listened to.. thanks man, I really appreciate the feedback..
Lt. Bob -

we already spoke, so I'll just say, "hey bud!"
Triple M - thanks man.. you have been constantly tolerating my crap and commenting.. Yeah I know the radio thing has been done,, but i just had to.. i think if I add vocals it might not seem as long.. (ie: boring)

thanks Trip!
Chuck U - cool to hear.. Yeah i hear the Alice thing too, especially with the long drawn out notes in the backround that are similar to something off 'Jar of Flies.' EBows rule!

thanks for wasting some time man..
crawdad - actually the really high notes in the backround are a keyboard that I ran through a distortion pedal.. all the other solos are with the EBow.. I kinda blurred the lines a bit..

It is quite possible that you did hear a phone because I have noticed that my guitar pickups, pickup the phone sometimes..

thanks crawdad
mixmkr - no you did not hear a phone..
SluiCe - like flies to dog crap..
sondriven - I don't use the computer to record.. I use a Tacam 788 portastudio.. It's easy to operate and it sounds decent (24bit 44.1) that is the biggest thing for a burnout like me.. ease of use.. Hopefully you'll check it out again after I add some vocals.. thanks for killing some time man..