Incomplete (pre-demo)

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SEDstar said:
holy sh!T, ICY !!!!
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Thanks very much for the kind words, SEDstar! I was derailed by a hurricane for a while, so I am trying to get back to the song now and finish it with the help of MelancholyGirl.

Any new material from you?

Best to you, my friend!
Joseph
 
new material...

I got away from music for a "while" and pursued other stuff for a break... some benchrest shooting, learning to walk without a WALKER and then without a CANE (blew a knee out explosively, lol), I only have a very SLIGHT limp and its not all the time now, hee hee... got a new job so I can continue to eat and sleep indoors, *you know*... hobbies? LMAO...

I wasnt really BACK into music again yet, just got bored and started fooling around, checked my music websites out... and piddled around with a piano thing... tried to make some lyrics for it (mainly 'cos I'm jealous of how well YOUR project is coming out, LMAO)

...but, I'm no songwriter, and lord knows I cant sing, hee hee. I try to hear a real singer in my head, but... LMAO

seriously, this song is coming along REAL well, this one your doing now.
 
SEDstar said:
new material...

I got away from music for a "while" and pursued other stuff for a break... some benchrest shooting, learning to walk without a WALKER and then without a CANE (blew a knee out explosively, lol), I only have a very SLIGHT limp and its not all the time now, hee hee... got a new job so I can continue to eat and sleep indoors, *you know*... hobbies? LMAO...

I wasnt really BACK into music again yet, just got bored and started fooling around, checked my music websites out... and piddled around with a piano thing... tried to make some lyrics for it (mainly 'cos I'm jealous of how well YOUR project is coming out, LMAO)

...but, I'm no songwriter, and lord knows I cant sing, hee hee. I try to hear a real singer in my head, but... LMAO

seriously, this song is coming along REAL well, this one your doing now.
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I hope your knee is still recovering, my friend. I really admire your ability to compose film-ready instrumentals. Excellent stuff from you in the past! I'm looking forward to hearing more of your work soon. :-)

Cheers,
Joseph
 
Greetings all. Of the two mixes below, which one sounds the best? Thanks! The song will become a duet with my good friend, MelancholyGirl, but I am trying to work out the best backing track mix with the vox first.

Mix 1
https://www.box.com/s/ta1y1rbiywkdv7zp1g8a

Mix 2
https://www.box.com/s/emvplxjmnti5eoeg64je

Incomplete

Words and music by Joseph Spain
Created with ChordPulse 2.2 and Acoustica Mixcraft 6.0
Produced by Joseph Spain
Demo recording
Copyright: Joseph Spain 2012

verse 1
I wore the ghost and lived the grief
Through dark of night, through dark of day
In all the world no gods or angels sang
There has to be wonders that I can't see

chorus
Across all time and tide
Deeper than lonely
True words can find their way into one's heart
Your love can save a soul that is incomplete
Night becomes a day
Brighter than Heaven
True words can find their way into one's heart
Your love can save a soul that is incomplete

verse 2
Through emptiness I lost the will
Through dark of night, through dark and fear
Of all the world the loss of love claimed me
There has to be wonders that I can't see
 
wellllll, now its my turn to thank YOU for the *kind words*...

but i cant tell a lie (well I CAN, but i wont)... "film ready" my tracks are not, lol

(I KNOW this by listening to the stuff the real composers on my classical site post up... makes me sick to hear it, ha ha)

i rather get "kicked around" over there, as I dont quite "measure up" yet, hee hee.
 
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