Improvments

[pod4477]

Hey guys im new here. Im a guitarist and iv ebeen recording alot of home recordings int he past years. I know i need improvment. All of my drum tracks are from a drum machine so dont laugh lol. Can anyone please give me some tips or improvements on my stuff. The link to some of my songs is http://www.myspace.com/markpmusic. Kry and Dove are the newest songs. Thanks guys. Currently im having a pain with the bass eq i cant seem to get it form getting lost in the mix, but with reading some of ur posts ive fixed it a bit.

 

[Crumbles]

Keep moving. About 7 below this one

 

[Grilled_Cheese]

I'm listening to 'Dove' and it's not too bad. Cool vocal effect but maybe a little too much in some parts.

Guitar tone sounds pretty good, but maybe double it up (double-track it) so it has more of a full sound. When there aren't any other instruments playing it sounds like there's something missing. Slight delay might also help.

I wasn't crazy about the part right before it gets faster towards the end, it scared the hell out of me.

And it also seems to end not long after building up, which seems odd.

Good song though.

 

[tarnationsauce2]

Cross-posting sucks.
Especially when it's a poorly veiled attempt at self promotion.

 

[pod4477]

nah man it isnt i just thought this was the MP3 forum for some reason and im not self promoting dumb ass.

 

[tarnationsauce2]

Umm, are you calling me a dumbass? Or did you forget to place an "a" between the word "not" and "promoting"?

Not like I really care either way.

 

[pod4477]

lol that didnt make sense at all, anyway im just lookin for tips i dont really give a shit if anyone likes it. But that would be nice.