mrjlr
Member
Wrote the lyrics literally in 90 seconds......
I hope you like it....
Jeff
I hope you like it....
Jeff
BTStudio
Well-known member
Hey listening and writing, sounding pretty damn good. Noticing the bass is more in the middle and drums are realistic sounding . Only tiny nit is that the vocal gets just a bit lost in the bridge before first solo. Lyrics are great, chops even better ??
mrjlr
Member
Thank you!
Papanate
Well-known member
You are sticking to the 70s rock sound? You could do better you know?
mrjlr
Member
Suggestions???
Papanate
Well-known member
Yeah update - stop with the 70s cliches' and experiment with Alternative Guitar styles - I can hear your direction - IOWs stop playing blues oriented music.
mrjlr
Member
mark skinner
Well-known member
Love your Allmon Bros. vocal style. I believe I would widen out the backing instruments a little. The drums seem to be the widest instrument with everything else sounding up the middle. I believe I would also brighten everything up a little , except the drums and bass . Very nice traditional guitar playing. Enjoyed it mark
PorterhouseMusic
Well-known member
mrjlr
Member
Thanks guys!!!!
Jeff
Jeff
B
Bulls Hit
Well-known member
Using canned drums I would be tempted to bring in that tom fill just occasionally instead of all the way through. Otherwise nice job. Vocals, guitar chops, got it all
Irwin abrigo
Active member
Hi, For me the vocal stand out. I like your singing voice. And I must say nice lyric.
