Tied Up And Twisted - Original blues/rock song

[mrjlr]

I wrote this about 5 weeks ago....my very first original song!
Just me, some guitars and Reaper DAW.....oh, and Amplitube....no real amps.
I have TONS of great amps, but Amplitube is just so much easier!
Most of it was one take and improvised.....

I'd love any opinions good or bad!

Hope you like it.....!





Jeff

 

[spantini]

Nice piece. Is your guitar rig on this tune all AmpliTube, or ya got some outboard pedals working?

 

[mrjlr]

Nice piece. Is your guitar rig on this tune all AmpliTube, or ya got some outboard pedals working?

100% Amplitube

Jeff

 

[PorterhouseMusic]

Nice playing dude! Sounds good.

 

[BTStudio]

Yah I like this one too,
Guy

 

[Papanate]

I'd love any opinions good or bad!

Guitars are mixed down low - way more than the Vocals are mixed up - in terms of song - I mean - do we really need another guitar blues come rock song?

 

[mrjlr]

Guitars are mixed down low - way more than the Vocals are mixed up - in terms of song - I mean - do we really need another guitar blues come rock song?

Yes....yes we do!
Thank you for the mix suggestions!

Jeff

 

[K-dub]

Drums are WAY too forward ... guitars are too in back. Vocals are setting about right. Is there a bass playing?

 

[mrjlr]

Drums are WAY too forward ... guitars are too in back. Vocals are setting about right. Is there a bass playing?

Ya...there's a bass.....kinda buried....ugh!



Jeff

 

[Bulls Hit]

Yeh I agree with the above. Also I would simplify the drums, the repetitive fills aren't contributing. Pretty good for your first original

 

[mrjlr]

Yeh I agree with the above. Also I would simplify the drums, the repetitive fills aren't contributing. Pretty good for your first original

Thank you!
Honestly!


Jeff