If you are bored

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Sounds like he`s headed in a straight line right into his niche. Pretty darn good.
I`d like to hear a little more dynamics on the guitar, back off a little more when he`s singing and press the fills between a little more , but it was sweet.
I dont know much but it was good :)
 
A cut above.

Really like it, honest & unique, and therefore compelling.

Personally, could have done with some sonic escalation later on, strings maybe, drum break perhaps, but this isn't important.

:cool:
 
hey i listnened to this the other day then got preoccupied before i could reply....but to echo the other comments i really dug this song....the lyrics the vocal delivery all of it...i did think a coupla spots were a bit long on the "just " acoustic guitar..but thats mainly a preference thing...



very nice job!.

jamal
 
Wow...I love the guy's voice. The mix is bugging me a bit because of the direct recording of the guitar...it's just harsh on the ears after awhile. I vote for mic'ing the guitar.

Otherwise, this is really easy to listen to, and he has a quality about his voice that sounds very real...but not in that "I can't sing on pitch" kinda' way. Very good, actually.

Thanks,
Chris
 
Excellent song.The singer has a good voice.Nice vocal phrasing of the melody.Good harmonies.I like it a la.
 
He puts a lot of effort and feeling into his song.

Your basic teenage angst, youthful sound. Mellow coffee bar stuff.
 
I hate to be negative, but I became very tired of hearing the same upper guitar notes the whole freaking song. ;)

Singer has a nice voice, and the song is structured pretty nicely. Voicing of chord progressions could have had some more variety. Kind of grating after a while. Nice recording quality though.
 
Hey guys, thanks for all the listens and responses. I honestly, truly, appreciate the recording critics who posted. I know there is not much to this recording, but those who criticized have helped tremendously.

If you guys would like to throw any feedback to the artist himself, his e-mail addy is stockholmprofile@hotmail.com, I'm sure he would get a kick out of it.

Once again, I really appreciate the responses and criticisms. You guys will have a lot of criticizing to do in a few weeks when I post a mix of my first "real" mixed tune. :D


Bigus Dickus - Don't hate to be negative, negativity is what helps people learn and grow ;)

Thanks,
Daryl
 
Great tune.That kid's got the voice,nice composition...but I gotta agree with Bigus,another guitar track during the chorus maybe or some boards


Bigus Dickus said:
I hate to be negative, but I became very tired of hearing the same upper guitar notes the whole freaking song. ;


I must hear more of this dudes stuff and I will E-mail him some encouragement...peace out ya'all
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