I wasn't sure about posting this one...

[Mothers Bad Son]

because of the negative personal attack I got at the Reaper DAW compositions board ( I use Reaper as my DAW). No problem with the mix, just the subject matter it seems. I decided to post it here anyway for feedback. Feel free to make any comment you want to. I am trying hard to write and record quality sounding songs but this one touched a raw nerve or two for sure.

"In my room"

SoundClick artist: Mothers Bad Son - Mothers Bad Son is Rick Hansen. lv2getrich@yahoo.com

Rick
a.k.a. Mothers Bad Son

 

[kcearl]

I only read two comments there and one was an honest critique??? did they remove some posts?

I wouldnt know what anyone would attack you over, seems a pretty straightforward song

I find the vocals sitting on top of the music a little and pitchy at parts, not much though, prolly not enough to retrack or distract

the whole mix could do with a little more "glue" imho...but it doesnt sound bad as it is

I kinda like the dated clips at the end, shit I still stick them in most of my tunes...Im on my internet PC so I wouldnt like to really comment on the mix more without my monitors

 

[Mothers Bad Son]

Thanks, I was referring to the "song by losers about losers loosing" or some such thing. Maybe he thought this song is auto-biographical or something. Anyhow thanks for the listen and the words. I hope I'm geting better with each attempt.

Rick

 

[kcearl]

ahh...I think when English is a second language sometimes it gets lost in translation