Sounds promising RayC, I had a couple of listens with the lyrics up in front of me and aside from getting an idea how it jogs along, I like all the subtle sounds which occur throughout the track and the dynamic range you have even at this early stage. It just goes to show how a perception/anticipation which came about through simply reading lyrics can be broadsided by actually hearing the music and getting a feel for the overall tone/mood. I totally appreciate the logistics you mentioned in respect of getting it all together, I only have myself to organize and having done my first track/post here, then significantly raising my expectations while working towards my next effort, I am finding it takes time to do things and have them done to a standard that I feel is the best I can hope for during my novice period. I think this has real potential and I look forward to hearing the track evolve into the finished article.
Regards
Tim