wfaraoni
ear art's not a science
Jagular, Listening on monitors with my own deaf ears, The guitar sound was a little weak, maybe too distant sounding also not enough brilliance.
I know your vocal potential from songs like "the gift" and even though this is definitely a superior performance on the vox its not your usual "SUPREME" performance . I'd like to hear some harmony in there to fill the dry spots.
The phrasing seems really very difficult in some places and though you managed to pull it off , you can, and often do much better.
On the flipside , I wish I could produce an equal sound in two weeks which you have created in a quick 1.5 hour session.
Im waiting for another one from you where I can play it and get more of those , WOW, Who is that? comments from the unsuspecting Then I can spring the , he's Not a paid pro, YET!! stuff on em! hehe
Overall a Great first take of a Very nice song
Peace and prosperity to you
Bill
I know your vocal potential from songs like "the gift" and even though this is definitely a superior performance on the vox its not your usual "SUPREME" performance . I'd like to hear some harmony in there to fill the dry spots.
The phrasing seems really very difficult in some places and though you managed to pull it off , you can, and often do much better.
On the flipside , I wish I could produce an equal sound in two weeks which you have created in a quick 1.5 hour session.
Im waiting for another one from you where I can play it and get more of those , WOW, Who is that? comments from the unsuspecting Then I can spring the , he's Not a paid pro, YET!! stuff on em! hehe
Overall a Great first take of a Very nice song
Peace and prosperity to you
Bill