How to remake A song for practice

[Aproducer]

I'm trying to remake a song for practice, but I cant get the sound as the Original.

This is my remake: https://soundcloud.com/user-194532225/vid-20160505-165411/s-OKiU1

And I'm trying to remake this instrumental: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YnilceL4FwU

How can I get the sound more like the original?


Thanks!