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DM60
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OK, good start. Here is the problem, while your melody is really great, it ain't three minutes great. Now, take this for how ever you want it, but you take something great like you have, shorten and cut it up in three/four sections (target around 4-5 minutes, longer if you get some cool vibes going), have the nice melody going, hit the your note (you'll have to figure that one out), hold, then beat the crap out of it with the same pattern, (same tempo, double down) find a good place to transition, move back to the mellow melody. Repeat, rinse (a collision of the two). Then my friend, you would have an interesting tune.
Its good, just doesn't go anywhere. Hope I didn't insult, but you could really take this somewhere.
Its good, just doesn't go anywhere. Hope I didn't insult, but you could really take this somewhere.
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Big Thier
Member
I feel you lol. I just wanted to know, how does the mix sound though? The mixing. Anyway, this track will have lyrics on. The main focus would be the lyrics I guess. It's a simple rap beat for sure.
DM60
Well-known member
I really couldn't say it is a good or bad mix as it is pretty simple. I didn't hear anything glaring. It is a nice start.