I'm thinking Deftones after hanging out with Killswitch Engage too long. Not my favorite style of rock, but I don't DISLIKE it. These guys definately have talent.
The main guitar is way to harsh. I think it's miked too close, or needs some verb to spread it around. Also too much gain on the amp or amp modeler?? for me. I can barely hear the tone of the note. Also sounds like you just used one mic in front of the cab. I would try using a combo of a 58 near the grill and a large diapragm condenser several feet back, NOT directly in front of the amp, and pointed at the spot where the side of of the cab meets the grill. That will give you a nice picture of the cab itself inside the room. Keep in mind that this might work against you if the room, and placement within the room, sound poor. Also, two mics might introduce phase cancellation - combine both tracks to mono to see if they're battling each other or not.
Drums are pretty solid, I'll leave pointers on that to the next guy who responds.
Vox - same deal.
I think if you work on the guitar tone and make it bark harder, the whole song will rock the way you want it to. Yeah.
This kind of band - borrow a bass with active pickups and run it through a Ampeg SVT head on a coffin 8x10 cab. Mic with a kick mic and a 57. If you can finagle that, you'll love the results!