Hip-Hop tracks, request reviews

[Call Me Cell]

what's going on all i've been recording and producing music for about six years now, and i'd just like some feedback on my mixing and recording. I'm currently using Sonar 4, fruityloops 4, a variety of plugins and an AKG c100s microphone. once again to all interested any feedback is welcome. thanks and keep up the good work that all you artists doing. Call Me Cell


http://www.artistlaunch.com/artist4.asp?artistid=7837

 

[ender4trackmind]

Just checked out on fire...hahaha not bad at all, in fact its got some downright hooky stuff in it. The ONLY and I do mean ONLY thing I would do with the track...needs a thick bass on it, with a quick attack.

With that it would honestly just machine gun folks down "