"Hawks"

[rsdean]

Hi All, here's a new song I just finished. I hope you enjoy and thanks for listening.

Bob

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"Hawks"

Just another morning
The moon is growing dim
Snowflakes in the empty sky
Like whispers in the wind
I could stand here for hours
But the winters blowing in
Spread your wings and circle once again

Like a shadow on a meadow
Unbroken by light
She haunts my deepest thoughts
In the middle of the night
Like a songless Troubadour
Whose words are on the mend
Spread your wings and circle once again

An angel or a phantom
Memories can rob you blind
But I can still remember
What she looked like the last time
I saw her in the city
The way you recognize a friend
Spread your wings and circle once again

It's coming up on midnight
It's another cold December
And I should get some sleep
While the ghosts of time remember
The long golden strands
That twists in the summer wind
Spread your wings and circle once again

We sometimes spoke of children
The way you speak of plans
Neither of us settled down
Just held their unborn hands
We circled from afar
Like two hawks just closing in
Spread your wings and circle once again

Repeat first verse - end

 

[trumpino1]

Sounds pretty good and is a very nice song. I just wonder what it might sound like if you did some more panning, like putting the acoustic more over to the left and maybe spreading the back vocals a little more from the center. Just a suggestion. It sounds pretty good the way it is and that might not work for what YOU want. It just all sounds a little in the center to me. Great song though.

Trump

 

[rsdean]

Trump, thanks for listening and your thoughts - I appreciate it. Some good suggestions on the mix.

Bob

 

[trumpino1]

Like I said it might not be what you want so take my suggestions with a grain of salt. You got a nice sound going there. Keep em' coming it was a great listen.

 

[rsdean]

Thanks again Trump.

Bob