cool vibe,
it's mellow, but hinting at something else to come, like a heavier section after the 2nd chorus..
you do build it up in the 2nd half, which is a good thing.
and i dig the arpegiated sections at the end of the verse section..
nice guitar performances,
the guitar on the right (nylon) sounds like it's getting hampered by an overall aggressive compressor...
or was just too hot while recording it, and then getting squashed.
i think the vox should be bone dry.
the vox backgrounds need to come down a bit in the first half, because they are a bit off in the intonation,
the 2nd big section is better. it's hard to nail those high harmonies and not have them drift when you hold them out there for so long.
i think you could lose the wind at the end, it doesn't add anything, but is necessary at the beginning.