Gonna get laid

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Hey,
I wrote this song for my ex-girlfriend/maybe gonna be girlfriend again for christmas. She's in the Camen Islands so I haven't been able to give it to her yet, but I wanted to get some feedback to see if there's anything I missed or could do differently, to make the song better. They lyrics might not make sense, it's a lot of inside jokes, but let me know anyways if it's too cheesy. :)



-Jon
 
sounds good..

not the type of tune I'm into, but keeping in mind the intent, everything sounds decent.. I think you will achieve your goal with this one.. :)
 
Jon-This Cheezy piece of crap is gonna get you so,so laid,bro!!I like the song but it's radio gaga,there's too much of this type of music out there....WHOA you said cheezy,so you admit it....If she don't at least blow you then she's a dyke and you should go for her sister.Nice recording and you've got a good voice too:D.Lots of luck.Bag her one more time for me:D
 
Woa! Very nice. I like the sound of everything. Well done.
 
Thanks guys,
Yeah, it's total mush and I'm embarassed to show it to people I know, but I just hope she'll appreciate it. She's a musician too, so I just want to make sure there are no pops, clicks out of tune vox, and other stuff I missed. Sadest part is I mean it all. When did I go from heavy rock to cream cheese. Love sucks!
 
hey this song is pretty good...sounds like something from the radio
 
You have a mint voice too man... I get so pissed off when I check out the clinic. Mint little guitar fills too. I agree with everyone else about the radio thing.. I can hear this getting jammed down my throat ever 3 or 4 minutes...
 
song and recording rocks....what equipment did you use?.....


hopefully she doesnt hook up with some island dude and stay.......
 
got some pretty weird inside jokes but hey its cool. Good tune here, the quality is really nice... nice guitar work on this piece.
 
Very nice. I think it could stand a touch of reverb...but I doubt she'll complain.
 
Hey there, Jon. I am very impressed by the composition, presentation, and "feeling" aspect of this tune. Your voice is a gem. The guitar is beautifilly played and finely recorded. I give you a rock-solid "10" for "vibe". In regards to "commercial" sounding aspect of your song, those tunes on the radio being played over and over again (especially the billboard top-40 contemparary stuff) are generally well composed,arranged, melodically good shit, IMHO. Pay no mind. LOL. It is the melody, vibe, and sometimes simplicity that does well in this genre. You have it dude. Keep up the good work. ~~~lEE
 
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