I like the lyrics of this one a lot. There's some really nice imagery and sentiment going on.
Sorry ... a little aside here ... this has been bugging me because I keep seeing it consistently in your posts. It's spelled "to" when using the preposition form---as in, "I went to the store," etc. It's the adverb form that's spelled "too" --- as in, "I'm too tired to do this right now" or "He's coming to the store too." (Actually, "to" can be an adverb as well, but it's much less common than the preposition form--- "I pulled the door to" is an example of the adverb "to".)
Anyway, the music sounds nice too, but it's more difficult to judge those aspects because the performance is a bit loosey goosey.