feedback needed on 1st posted track

[L'espion Noir]

please hook me up with some opinions (any)

what need to be turned down or up and what not

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/wyjaneousmusic.htm



respect

 

[Wingpen]

the lead line sounds out of time in places, maybe try quantizing it.

 

[Neeps]

I'd slightly slide the gain down on the Bontempi Barbie Keyboard

and add a little compression to the snare on the E-Groves Electronic Standing Drum Kit

 

[jake-owa]

There's a deep synth that seems too loud to me. The low lows don't seem to be there which could be my monitors. The clav-lead is not right in the pocket.
The melody seems too off-the-cuff and not intentonal enough.
Many cheezy sounds but hey, if that's what you're into what can I say?

Where's the rapper?

 

[Wingpen]

hahaha

i didnt want to say anything!

I might get me one of those barbies

 

[Neeps]

What I meant to say is that the instruments used sound a little cheap to me... I honestly have only really heard music like this before coming as a preset on a cheap casio keyboard or something...

please don't be offended... you did ask for "any" opinions...

 

[Neeps]

that said... I have managed to listen to it on loop for the last 25 minutes... and I do dig some of those built in keyboard tunes... it would be nice if every 10 seconds or so it would switch style.. perhaps going from disco to bossa nova through to marching band... on to pop followed by latin and then back to disco...

 

[L'espion Noir]

thanks guys i really appreciate it

please keep it coming

 

[Rokket]

What I meant to say is that the instruments used sound a little cheap to me... I honestly have only really heard music like this before coming as a preset on a cheap casio keyboard or something...

please don't be offended... you did ask for "any" opinions...

I had to listen just because you said that. I agree it sounds like a cheap keyboard. But it's still kinda cool. My pc speakers didn't like it much...

 

[L'espion Noir]

The clav-lead is not right in the pocket.
The melody seems too off-the-cuff and not intentonal enough.
Where's the rapper?

could you be a bit more explicit please

Where's the rapper?

learning how to become one

please don't be offended... you did ask for "any" opinions...

exactemente

I'd slightly slide the gain down on the Bontempi Barbie Keyboard

and add a little compression to the snare on the E-Groves Electronic Standing Drum Kit

lmao

they ran out of the barbie keyboard so i had to get the fisher price (school bus yellow) but as you can i'm gonna be a star. lol


thanks again guys

 

[jake-owa]

Ok, the lead sounds kinda ho-humish and not like anything is being intended by it. It has no real feel besides filling space.

 

[Neeps]

lmao

they ran out of the barbie keyboard so i had to get the fisher price (school bus yellow) but as you can i'm gonna be a star. lol

Phew... I was worried I was being a dickhead!

Keep at it.

There are loads of good ideas on the track just not too many great instrument sounds...

 

[L'espion Noir]

Perhaps it's time to dig into my vst's and the RS7k for sounds

 

[L'espion Noir]

Ok, the lead sounds kinda ho-humish and not like anything is being intended by it. It has no real feel besides filling space.

i think i see what you mean anyway thanks alot