crosstudio
New member
the outro lasted too long for me. i was satisfied after the first couple of snare hits ended at 2:03.
either my laptop speakers (which means i have to listen to it again tomorrow to hear what it REALLY sounded like) have absolutely no bass at all, or theres no bass line in your track. either way, i missed it... alot.
i could hear it in my head and it was nice.
great intro, great beat-n-melody to put a wicked hook over, nicely done break at 1:00 but it lasted 4 bars too long for me. everything to this track is right... except... when does the artist get to spit? i don't hear any space for verses.
your instrumentation always makes me listen to your tunes twice before i critique. you have very good melodic sensibilities and a overall sense of space.
like miles davis said... it's that space between the notes!
either my laptop speakers (which means i have to listen to it again tomorrow to hear what it REALLY sounded like) have absolutely no bass at all, or theres no bass line in your track. either way, i missed it... alot.
i could hear it in my head and it was nice.
great intro, great beat-n-melody to put a wicked hook over, nicely done break at 1:00 but it lasted 4 bars too long for me. everything to this track is right... except... when does the artist get to spit? i don't hear any space for verses.
your instrumentation always makes me listen to your tunes twice before i critique. you have very good melodic sensibilities and a overall sense of space.
like miles davis said... it's that space between the notes!
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flossyboy
New member
sounds like that could be a hit.....but like cross said, when do i come in with a verse hahahahahahaha i can usally start freestyling to some instantly but that one had me stopping and starting ever few bars.
i didn't hear a bassline either and i could hear one that would be tight with it.
put a bassline in that joint and make some space for a spitter and you got a homerun hitter with ya
That Texas Fella
sugaty@aol.com
i didn't hear a bassline either and i could hear one that would be tight with it.
put a bassline in that joint and make some space for a spitter and you got a homerun hitter with ya
That Texas Fella
sugaty@aol.com
soundboy
New member
THANX FELLAS
Hi_D_Ho_Man
Tha' So & So ,So & So
This track is hot
it really could use a bassline though. This is one of the best i've heard from u. I dont see any reason why this cant be flowed over just the way it is.
it really could use a bassline though. This is one of the best i've heard from u. I dont see any reason why this cant be flowed over just the way it is.
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musac
New member
my computer must be trippin it played 50's in the club ocopello
i'll try again in a min
i clicked the lo-fi link
i'll try again in a min
i clicked the lo-fi link
Abyyss
that's life
U like those string samples, don't u Soundboy 
They always seem to creep their way into your pieces.
I'm liking what I hear, could do with a bassline - it is sounding a bit empty with the bits of strings alone. I'd also like to hear the tune that u use 2 introduce it with becoming more dominant.
Outro is a bit 2 long as well.
And, as musac said - ur lo-fi link is broken -> it links 2 an acapella of "In da Club".
They always seem to creep their way into your pieces.
I'm liking what I hear, could do with a bassline - it is sounding a bit empty with the bits of strings alone. I'd also like to hear the tune that u use 2 introduce it with becoming more dominant.
Outro is a bit 2 long as well.
And, as musac said - ur lo-fi link is broken -> it links 2 an acapella of "In da Club".
Abyyss
that's life
"In da Club" actually goes alright with the beat. Maybe u could cut your song up so the hook comes in on the chorus and the verse parts last long enough. I'd like 2 hear how that sounds.
soundboy
New member
THANXS FOR THE FEEDBACK FELLAS