Eggshells final mix

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packrobottom

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gong thru all songs on the album I've been working on
This one is called eggshells. It feels pretty close but something always jumps out to fresh ears.

96/24 wav

mp3


Lyrics

Egg Shells

Hey boy make your mind up
or you'll wind up just like him
Keep it down till he times out
from the cigarettes and gin

Hey girl keep your door locked
And when he knocks don’t give in
In the dark with a flashlight
Under cover from his sin

Eggshells to keep it civil
They don’ t show it
You’d never know it
Tip toe around the devil
You’d Never know it
She’s so stoic

Packed my things while he's at work
And took the 92
Start again, while I still can,
there’s nothing else to do.

Eggshells to keep it civil
They never show it
She’s so stoic

Hey ma where’d you wind up
 
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Maybe there are mixing tweaks that you can do, but I enjoyed listening to the song which I thought was interesting and engaging, quirky and original.
 
gong thru all songs on the album I've been working on
This one is called eggshells. It feels pretty close but something always jumps out to fresh ears.

96/24 wav

mp3
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I love the Wave File - the sound is really good and balanced - and the guitar part on the ‘Pack my Things’ is superb - the only thing I would do (and it’s just an opinion) is on the Chorus - bring up a little bit higher Harmony on the 'Eggshells - to keep it civil” on the end - and then keep the ‘stoic’ Harmony part as it is - but that might wreck the feel of the whole song - nevermind.
 
I love the Wave File - the sound is really good and balanced - and the guitar part on the ‘Pack my Things’ is superb - the only thing I would do (and it’s just an opinion) is on the Chorus - bring up a little bit higher Harmony on the 'Eggshells - to keep it civil” on the end - and then keep the ‘stoic’ Harmony part as it is - but that might wreck the feel of the whole song - nevermind.
that is a good idea as that higher part on each chorus adds more energy I will do that thanks and post update shortly
Update: louder vocal in wav not mp3 for comparison.
 
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This sounded familiar, did you post an earlier version? I wouldn't change anything. I like it nice job.
 
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