Dwelling Place (My new tune)

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Hi man! I'm not a fan of that kind of music, but I think it has a good feel. Maybe you should write some lyrics and try to sing a melody. I imagine a female voice, I don't know.

They've moved your post to marketing, I don't understand why...
 
I actually put it here, but I think I would get more views in the MP3 Mixing Clinic :/

Thanks for the feedback mate, I appreciate it

TheLurker
 
I have a new mix/master up now... I feel like it needs to be ... longer? Anyone else agree?
 
Nice mix. I think a nice female vocal on this would really add to this. Just long ahhs and free flow sounds. Something smooth and light.

Yes, longer and you could use your base and work off of that.

Nice work.
 
Thanks Chili!

Well that's two people saying a female voice would be nice. I happen to know a female with a nice voice... I'll see what I can do!

DM60 - Question. When I extend the track to make it longer should I bring in other elements or basically just take the parts already that I have and repeat them to make things longer? Just wanted your viewpoint :D

TheLurker
 
Yea, I wouldn't just repeat, I would keep growing it. Play with different sub melodies and expand what you've presented us. Not complexity for the sake of complexity, but continue with interesting textures and sounds to keep it interesting.

I think the base of the song is strong enough to add to it. But don't just slap anything on there, really work it and experiment. If you are patient enough you will probably find some hidden treasures.
 
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