Don't Say, Just Pay

[Irwin abrigo]

(This song it is for a female vocalist) Kindly give me your thoughts on the song over all. This is an instrumental song a melody for the vocalist to sing, Below is the lyric.

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Don’t Say Just Pay
© 2018 Irwin Byron Abrigo

(1st Verse)
You said you’ll buy me, everything fancy
Take me to the Caribbean we’ll have fun, there ain’t no doubt
But you never tell me, how much you care
You never tell me, how much you care

(Pre Chorus)
Well, I’m taking you down town going shopping
At a jewelry store you’ll be buying, I don’t want to hear a thing

(Chorus)
Don’t say, just pay just pay, don’t say, buy me a wedding ring
Just pay, don’t say don’t say, just pay, buy me a wedding ring

(2nd Verse)
You said you’ll take me, me out on Fridays
It’s only one time a week you I’ll see, not those other days
And you never tell me that you love me
You never tell me that you love me

(Pre Chorus)
Well, I’m taking you down town going shopping
At a jewelry store you’ll be buying, I don’t want to hear a thing

(Chorus)
Don’t say, just pay just pay, don’t say, buy me a wedding ring
Just pay, don’t say don’t say, just pay, buy me a wedding ring

(Bridge)
If you love me say you love me If you don’t you got to let me know
If you don’t love me don’t come around me anymore
Leave me alone

(3rd verse)
You never said you wanna get marry
Wanna raise a family here you come, say the same things
Unnecessary words is what I don’t want to be hearing
I don’t wanna hear a thing, don’t wanna hear anything


(Chorus)
Don’t say, just pay just pay, don’t say, buy me a wedding ring
Just pay, don’t say don’t say, just pay, buy me a wedding ring
(Repeat)

 

[Big Thier]

Why don't you sing it yourself to give us an idea of the vocal melody?

 

[VomitHatSteve]

The song itself or the recording?

The recording sounds like a Casio demo, so you probably won't be able to pitch it like that.

The melody seems kind of stilted and meandering, so I'm not really sure about the potential of the song either... Plus we have no clue what the lyrics are.

 

[Irwin abrigo]

Why don't you sing it yourself to give us an idea of the vocal melody?

Sure, I will as soon as I can fine a real vocalist to sing it, I myself cannot sing this song because it were written for a female singer.

 

[Irwin abrigo]

The song itself or the recording?

The recording sounds like a Casio demo, so you probably won't be able to pitch it like that.

The melody seems kind of stilted and meandering, so I'm not really sure about the potential of the song either... Plus we have no clue what the lyrics are.

Thank you VomitHatSteve, Point taken, I have to go back and do some more work on this song.