Hi there. I guess I'd probably pull the bass back a little. Also, while I think the vocal level is not unreasonably low, the words themselves are pretty tough to comprehend. They just seem really blurry. It could be either due to some sloppy doubling or your pronunciation of certain words or both. I think cleaning them up would give the listener something to focus on as the current arrangement gets a little droney and mid-tempo in places, and I guess I'm not really hearing any kind of hook.
Thanks for the comments!!! I was thinking about the drums myself and wheter thjey were too forward... somehow I seemed to like them there to give it a real aggressive vibe as the guitars and pads and the slight phased bass give it a droney, feeling as you said...and my thoughts about the vocals and why they are so "in the mix" is that they sound like an echo coming from behind...but yes they probably should be brough up a bit and the bass and drums down