Intro sounds like early Cure (Striplight) meets Radiohead (the Bends).
Fun the guitar is just a little aggressive beside the vocal.
You should listen to Cpt Matchbox Whoopie Band (Smoke Dreams).
If you do have something on the vocals, it's very, very tight -- to the point of being more a close doubler/quick slap, lacking real "space". This isn't a bad thing, because everything else is so very "naked" (good word, seeking).
It's a good effect considering the intimacy, but I wouldn't term it "space".
If you do have something on the vocals, it's very, very tight -- to the point of being more a close doubler/quick slap, lacking real "space". This isn't a bad thing, because everything else is so very "naked" (good word, seeking).
It's a good effect considering the intimacy, but I wouldn't term it "space".
If you do have something on the vocals, it's very, very tight -- to the point of being more a close doubler/quick slap, lacking real "space". This isn't a bad thing, because everything else is so very "naked" (good word, seeking).
It's a good effect considering the intimacy, but I wouldn't term it "space".
I put a delay on the vocal, and put the guitar through the same delay. I set the delay so that I could j-u-s-t make out the delay at the ends of notes, and then dialed it back 10%. When I muted the effect, it was clearly lacking. When I unmuted it, I couldn't hear the effect in itself. Perfect. I don't know if that counts as 'space'. I think so, but I'm not sure. Basically, it sounds different with the effect on it. But I take your point. It's subtle.
This has a cool, playful feel about it - sounds like an old song from the 1930s, but done in dobro style.
I really like that opening falsetto line. If it were me, I'd be looking to reintroduce that in some form at some point later on in the song - underneath the main vocal somewhere as a counter-melody. I don't know if it would fit, but if it can I think it could add something special.
I thought the vocal sounded great. Really clear. And dry. I, therefore, give it a big thumbs-up.
I'm hearing some hiss in the quieter sections.
In the intro, the vocal gets a little harsh. Just a bit. Maybe my ears are a little over-sensitive. The vocal and guitar compete just a bit as well right before the song kicks into gear.
Drums sound good.
Everything here is a nit-pick. Overall sounds very good. Good performances as well.
Rob, TripleM: I cut the vocals a bit and changed the brushes sound. Thanks for the ideas - they got me into it. And this is what happened when I considered what you said.