Dave Matthews Cover Tune

[A1A2]

can't add anymore to what people have already covered. But, I would really like to hear you doing this song again micing the guitar.

AL

 

[Guernica]

You must really dig Eminem!!!

....uh, .....I like Eminem



....Looking forward to hearing your original man.


and I agree, definitely worthy of 5

 

[chrisharris]

....uh, .....I like Eminem

Word.

Something about that new millenium elvis just makes me listen with great intensity. Example:

"A little bit of weed mixed with some hard liquor, Some vodka to jump start my heart quicker, than the shocks when I get shocked at the hospital by the doctor when I'm not co-operating, When I'm rockin the table while he's operating, You waited this long, now stop debating, Cause I'm back, I'm on the rag and ovulating"

That may not be exactly right, but I've heard it about 50 times in the past 2 months, and I have yet to change the station.

I think I need counselling, but not just for this problem















































(and I know it's a dead issue, but dammit...a word cannot be "spelled correct," no matter which freakin' side of the verb you put it on. "Correct" is an adjective; therefore, it can only modify a noun. It is appropriate to say, for example, "the spelling of the word is correct." Correct modifies the noun, "spelling." (Yes, "spelling" is a NOUN in that sentence - the verb = "is"....just trust me on this one). "You spelled it correct" is flat wrong because the sentence requires an adverb (i.e., correctLY) to modify the verb (i.e., spelled), such that the sentence MUST read, "You spelled it correctly.") And my mommy was an English teacher and she beat me with closed fists daily so that I could save the world from people who know not of what they speak and your guitar sounds like ass but you're probably pretty funny so don't take it personally BYE

 

[winstonpisces]

...the dog that eats the dog off the pat of the proprietor of...

 

[winstonpisces]

Hey Winston,
The folks here take alot of pride in the stuff thats put up. Huge amounts of time and effort go into the songs that are posted........ Dont be offended by an honest critiqe here..... the truth is you hurried through this. It sounds like you know this yourself. The pitch on the vocs is bad, and the tones aint all that great either. It sounds like you know this..... so re-record it right . Youve been given a great place to start by two talented regulars in here. Have fun, We're looking forward to hearing what you can do


g

The pitch on the vocs is bad, and the tones aint all that great either.


Good God, I thought my statement about critizing my singing because of jealousy was true, but damn Guernica, I didn't know you were so eager to abet me in this haranguing of all you inferior musicians out there. FUCKING QUOTE, "THE PITCH ON THE VOCS IS BAD." I wander what Lord Sysyphus leader of tha CIRCLE JERKS considers good pitch..... hmmmm....
if only I had a damn mp3 of him singing!

(fairy of fidelity appears)

I believe you are looking for this:

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=1552&alid=-1

Check out track 3 (unconditional) my dear!!!

"Why yes, yes this is the vis-a-vis I have sought to corroborate my rhetoric. You shall receive a VERY LARGE reward for this you beacon of veracious divinity!!!"


THAT IS WHAT YOU CALL GOOD PITCH. FUCKING HORSE SHIT!!! ABSOLUTELY NO PASSION, LETHARGY AT ITS APEX!! IF YOU SAY, "WELL, I AM NOT THE BEST SINGER, BUT YOUR SINGING ISN'T GOOD EITHER," WELL, I SAY THIS TO YOU; I DO NOT TAKE FUCKING CRITIQUES FROM ASSES WHO ARE LESS SKILLED THAN I. IF YOU ARE NOT ON THE SAME LEVEL OR ABOVE, SHUT YOUR FUCKING MOUTH, CUS YOUR EGO SHALL NOT ALLOW YOU TO BE OBJECTIVE!!!


WINSTON THE FAIRY FORNICATOR

 

[winstonpisces]

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[TheRealWaldo]

This is the clinic, and critiques is what you'll get, if you can't take it, you'll go nowhere in this business.

P.S, please e-mail me proof of performance/recording rights for Dave Matthews ASAP, or I'm going to have to remove a few of your tracks.

W.

 

[Guernica]

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[Pinky]

You sounded too much like Billy Corgan, and unless you're billy corgan, that isn't typically a compliment.

Wasn't bad, though. Guitar was a bit "nylon" sounding, maybe more mic and less pickup next time.

**Man, I looked through this thread after I posted my initial reaction. Please don't hurt me for not loving your tune. **