Dance Around The Pyre (Gothic Doom/Rock)

[frank1985]

Hey folks, hope everyone is having a nice week. Grateful for some honest feedback on this track. Genre wise it's all over the place - hybrid electro doom psychedelia?

 

[frank1985]

Gentle bump....I did a bit more work to this

 

[Slouching Raymond]

Never heard of electro doom psychedelia. I have now.
A good listen. Probably good live, with a bit of theatre.

 

[Manslick]

Listening through my phone.
Sounds fine.
I like the tones.
Organ is cool.
Cool guitar tones and riffs.
Words could be clearer.

 

[Papanate]

Hey folks, hope everyone is having a nice week. Grateful for some honest feedback on this track. Genre wise it's all over the place - hybrid electro doom psychedelia?

Good description of your work - neat guitar sounds - I second @Manslick comment - buried/masked vocals - drums don’t impact enough for me.

 

[Eric V]

Very interesting, I like the doomy vocals, though the lyrics for me are hard to distinguish. I agree with @Papanate regarding the drums need more punch. All in all I really like it. Very original.

 

[frank1985]

Never heard of electro doom psychedelia. I have now.
A good listen. Probably good live, with a bit of theatre.

Thanks for the listen mate - funny you should mention theater because most of what I write is with some weird theatrical performance in mind, just need to find some like minded band mates, who are equally deranged

Listening through my phone.
Sounds fine.
I like the tones.
Organ is cool.
Cool guitar tones and riffs.
Words could be clearer.

Thank you, I'm working on getting the vocal balance right.

Good description of your work - neat guitar sounds - I second @Manslick comment - buried/masked vocals - drums don’t impact enough for me.

Cheers papante, working on it - thank you for the feedback

Very interesting, I like the doomy vocals, though the lyrics for me are hard to distinguish. I agree with @Papanate regarding the drums need more punch. All in all I really like it. Very original.

Thanks man for listening and for the feedback.

Consensus seems to be working on the vocal balance and making the drums hit a bit harder...actually I never noticed that the drums were lacking...always good to have other people listen.

Thanks again folks

 

[Bulls Hit]

Agree with other comments on vocals and drums. I like the guitar tones and riffs. Vaguely reminded me of Black Sabbath (the song) but very inventive and original. The composition sems to wander about a bit in the middle, maybe loses some impact. Having said that, everything sounds like it belongs where it is, so why not. I enjoyed the listens. Nice job

 

[Bulls Hit]

Vocals seem clearer now. Really liking this on 4th listen