critique please!

[adrianplunkett]

hi

recorded this today on cakewalk sonar 3, studio.

acoustic guitar and 2 voices.

the song is called "stole the show" - it's a little song about loss. i'd be very grateful for your critique.

if you'd like to listen - follow the link below and click on "mp3 music". listen to the song "stole the show". we also have another song posted - called "milk and honey", but that's a pro-recording; so you can save your critique on that one!

thanks

adrian
www.soundclick.com/jonasandplunkett

 

[Rockerbob]

Nice tune and good recording. The guitar seems a little weak. Perhaps a little compression, different mic position or EQ would help. I guess it already sounds a bit compressed, but seems to go away at times.

 

[adrianplunkett]

yeah - a lot of people have commented on the guitar sound being a little weak.

i need to re-mix, and am thinking of adding some strings.

spent about 3 weeks writing the lyrics, then 1 hour recording!

thanks

adrian