Could use some more input...

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Hey all, Im still working on this song and if you havent heard this version of it, please give it a go. I remixed it and feel its as good as I can get it from my gears standpoint.

Your likes and hates!

"Just A Dream"

http://www.mp3.com/sondriven

Thanks!

john
 
Hey Bro....

I only have one thing to say about that song.... F'N' AWESOME!

Really, If I heard that on the radio, I would sit in the car and wait to hear the name of the band and then go to the record store and buy it.....No bullshit!

Only one thing I noticed was the lyrics were a bit... ummm predictable....

Like...
I am here and gonna rock.
You make me smell, like a sock..

You know what I mean... you almost know what the next line will be....throw in a few things that don't perfectly rhyme now and then..... Or maybe you wanted that so im not sure....

But even the way it sits, I love it... I just thought I would tell you the one thing that I did notice.....

You Rock!

:)
 
Thanks Vox,

I wrote the song a few years ago, when my writing skills were somewhat more poor than of late. Are the lyrics corny or just predictable?

Thanks, glad you liked it. I live in the thumb area of Michigan and theres a Canadian Rock station right here across the bridge and they are going through my cd to see if they will have me on a local time slot on Sunday night.

Thus, I am making sure my songs sound good enough.

Thanks again. Hey I see you have a cd. You wanna make a trade. One of yours for one of mine?

Later,
john
 
\m/

Keijo

Altho I don't like songs with religious messages ;)
 
Sondriven,

It's more of a predictable thing ....

Like "I had a dream..... makes me want to scream.."

I almost knew what you were gonna say next....


Sure, I will trade you cd's..... I will email you.... and give you the info etc.... a bit later.... I gotta run down and finish mastering the new tune.....

Thanks Bro...
 
Sondriven,

VoxVendor nailed it,

pretty good tune, reminds me a bit of "ORGY" (the band),
with a bit more of a dance feel to it. I hear what V.V. is saying about the vocals. Pretty cool though.

peace.





www.mp3.com/samicide
 
Thats cool! Thanks all, it sounds like the recording is good enough, just the writing sould use more creativity! I really appreciate everyones input.

This was the first time I got any on the actual songwriting which is good.


Later,

John
 
Not into the genre very much and agree with the above suggestions. Must say that the dance type stuff is really cool. I just have gotten sick of being pelted by guitars, though I know that's exactly what ALOT of people love. Anyways, my point is I like the sound alot, keep em comin man.


Laj
 
Nice, way, way better than most of the stuff posted on this board! Very professional sounding, fat sound. I would have to agree with the lyrical criticism above, but keep it up! I hear lots of potential... One last thought: If you need help with lyrics( like I do), don't rule out collaboration.
 
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