Could use some feedback! (Thanks in advance)

[iamhammill]

Hey everyone! I figured it was finally time to register and post something of my own after reading critiques of everyone else's music!


We're a young band and can't afford to go into the studio. I've decided to do it all myself, with anything laying around I can get my hands on. Fortunately, my high-school has some pretty decent condensers laying around, and I've built up a nice collection of 57s myself. I'm recording everything into a MOTU 8-pre and then into Garageband! (I know, I know...)

Anyways, this is the first two tracks of our debut EP. The album is a concept, so the tracks are seamless, but you should be able to hear when track 2 comes in.

I feel like something needs done with the vocals, but otherwise would love to hear anything that you all have to say.

Thanks in advance!
Jake

you can hear the track @

pythonrichards.com/ep/ozarks1.mp3

 

[iamhammill]

Only 11 views in 18 hours!? What's the deal my fellow recorders... seems like everyone else is getting some feedback. I need some answers!

 

[Vaquero Verbal]

The link doesn´t work :-(

 

[chugheshc]

welcome to the forum iammhammhill;
your link is not a link - hence, no comments.
you should also try and give a little before you ask for feedback; say, comment on 5 or ten other songs for every sing you put in.
just a thought.
cheers,
C.

 

[Nicole_Rose]

welcome to the forum iammhammhill;
your link is not a link - hence, no comments.
you should also try and give a little before you ask for feedback; say, comment on 5 or ten other songs for every sing you put in.
just a thought.
cheers,
C.

well i don't know if i'd put a number on it, but yeah, leaving comments in other people's threads is appreciated. and a proper link would make us lazy people more likely to listen